The reference to city lights at the end seems so disconnected, but it also just seems to work perfectly. Explain that. Haha! I can't either.

Great imagery, by the way.

This is amazing.

The last stanza is simply breathtaking.

Reminds me, qiute painfully, of my current situation.

Amazing job.

Adding to my Fav's

I love this poem's sort of mysterious tone.. I felt like I could relate to this in a way that would be a little hard for me to describe :D Anyways, Great Job with this