|Reviews for A Lesson In Acting|
| Fractured Illusion 8/25/07 . chapter 1
Imagine my surprise to see you when I cruise the Just In section! :D
"Hold them up like you have glitter in your hands, and you’re throwing your glitter."
Nothing but "What the hell?" comes to mind
That teacher must totally be a woman, by the way. I thought it was a man first, but when the teacher said "honey" it sealed the deal
*chuckling* That teacher is quite the obsessive one! I mean, even commenting on how to applaud? Well done, Ink!
Punctuation and commas were all perfect too. Didn't spot a mistake.
Again: Well done!
Keep it up!