I love this story! And Celeste :D

xx

Ali

Damn. Last chapter. Hopefully more is on the way, yes?

"Hey, I'm still reading."

Well, hell, I'm glad I didn't reveiw it then! Of course, I never read it, but whatever. So, Kaya has telekenisis as well? Hm.

Hm, nothing like a bit of frenzy to make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside... Hahaha

Evil twerp, that Myles. Of course, I guess that just solidifies Ace and Cele's relationship, 'eh?

O Witchy! Hahaha! I think hell's a-brewin'!

Secrets, secrets.

Least it wasn't over a text message...

So, let us see here. Magick, Vampyrs, Weres, and a plethora of other cool stuff.

Cool update and everyone learned what there super powers were too.

SirScott

Good; nice, long chapter. Though, it's a bit dialogue-driven. Also, I think that you're doing a little too much "telling", as opposed to "showing". Also, Celeste seems like she might turn out a little too perfect.

All in all, though, very good. I liked this a lot.

wow, mind control

i dont like holden! gr... but i like ace!

Interesting story. Magic powers, past lives, and councils are everything that a reader could want in a fantasy/supernatural story.

SirScott

Wow! A very intense chapter indeed. Apparently, Celeste hates Holden a lot. I agree with Giselle, though. I am very curious about what is going to happen next. Kaya seems to be the minor character who is just observing Celeste's strange predicament. I will mention the only typographical error that I could detect. In the first sentence that is not italicized, "My mind just keptkept spinning as I continued my glorious lip lock with the überhot Holden.", instead of saying "keptkept", you should have said "kept". Other than that little typo, your story was relatively free from any dyslexic problems/distracting elements. Good job.