This is great. I simply love the way you write; you tell everything in such an original way that I can't help but believe every word of it. This piece had a very strong, creepy mood throughout, and that can be a hard thing to maintain. Good job!

That scared me a lot, and I am NOT easily scared... Very, very creepy, you did absoloutley BRILLIANT.

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