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| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-08-26 ch 1,  | abuseWow, a worldly piece, if you'll excuse the pun. :) This is very encompassing, and that's nice to see in a poem this size. Really well-worded and the imagery was divine. Keep writing! :) |
| Katterree Fengari 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseI love the last stanza. The imagery in this is great. I almost want to guess that they green-blue glass is grass, from keeping the lid tight to preserve it...and the hints in that stanza about earthly smell. Beautiful. |