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| LiLi the Koala 2008-02-25 ch 1,  | abuseI love how this is essentialy two poems in one. Not to mention, the passion in there really makes the reader feel what you feel. Another excellent piece! |
| bulletcereal 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abusegood. I see what you mean. Ok, the cursing wasn't really nessasary, but you made it look like you were saying I was dumb. let's just say that I have learned to write in a unique way. I have always been one to not go with the flow. Your stuff's pretty good too. I know that I put in some unnessasary things and don't put in some nessasary things. I just try to give them the general idea and then give there imagination the rest. I want them to visualize these things. I do this so that they will be pleased and so that there are alot of different opinions. Sorry for the insults. I just do my own thing. |
| s1LeNtaNg3L 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abuseis 'you' supposed to mean me ? |