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Reviews For: False Hope
Chidori Nadare 2007-08-30 . chapter 1
I'm not sure if I understand the first sentence. Great job, though.

-C.N
Ashelin 2007-08-26 . chapter 1
I adore that first sentence. Though really, I adore the whole thing. It's just so true. Good job.
a silenced revolution 2007-08-25 . chapter 1
Not sure I really understand the first sentence. Anyway, nice.
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