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| Chidori Nadare 2007-08-30 ch 1,  | abuseI'm not sure if I understand the first sentence. Great job, though. -C.N |
| Ashelin 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseI adore that first sentence. Though really, I adore the whole thing. It's just so true. Good job. |
| perpetual questions 2007-08-25 ch 1, | abuseNot sure I really understand the first sentence. Anyway, nice. |