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| Ashelin 2007-08-26 ch 1,  | abuseAw, and to think I got all excited. Haha, just kidding. I liked the ending. Good job. |
| soft-spoken 2007-08-25 ch 1, | abusenicely done, I began reading this thinking it was going to be another teenaged love poem, but it was so much more than that. Actually, I'm sorry for even comparing it. But it was nicely done. Good humor and feeling. Good truth. Peace&Love -N |
| perpetual questions 2007-08-25 ch 1, | abuseIntriguing ending. Good questions and nice metaphors. |