I really like it, but you haven't updated in months...we will see though.

This was actually increadably funny and should be read by... a lot of people. Write more soon (hopefully)

Hehe! Lah-ve it!

My fav. way to vanquish her: -Be firm and refuse to cuddle.

I love the journal entry at the bottom! That was a definite plus!

Keep it up!

;-)


~Stel

XD

hehe...I love it.

I am now fully aware of what to do with a Mary Sue

lol that was funny ^^ but now reading this i now realize its redicously hard to make a good/normal charatar and i think you missed a sue an "anti sue" iono i just looked it up on wikipedia (yea lol they have an actual article on marry sues)

lmao very funny, and kinda sad for me as i realized that one of my new characters has many traits of a mary sue. hopefully i can change that before its too late

Very amusing and very useful. The most in depth exploration or a character archetype I have ever read.

Geez, I've been seriously doing some crappy jobs at OCs...Sorry, Gina (my OC for fanfiction), I may have to destroy you...darn...

Hah! Proof that I'm not the only one battling Sues! (In my account I've done an Anti-Sue campaign). Anyway, good work. We need more people doing this kind of thing.

Very good - almost like a written documentary. Actually IS one, if that's what you were going for! 5/5