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| Basara 2007-08-30 ch 1,  | abusein which where will be these be used? nice... |
| Aimee Raven 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseOh...you know, I usually believe it's rather futile and impossible to write a haiku in any language other than Chinese or Japanese, but I really love this! It paints a very poignant picture, it's terribly mystical and once you read it, you become lost in your thoughts, trying to imagine it all perfectly and you truly *feel* the moment. Excellent. "pandora's stones" is beautiful, the idea sort of just unfolds as you wonder how a stone could be pandora's, then you think of thoughts and the imagery sort of blossoms. Ah I'm getting ahead of myself here, I apologize. Good work :). |
| soft-spoken 2007-08-25 ch 1, | abusenicely done. |