For some strange reason, I decided to read this story again and wound up crying like a baby just like the first time I read it.

And again, didn't have to break out the eye drops.

Srsly. You HAVE to make friends with publishers.

You will hit it big, and I don't think you'll be able to crash.

Lovely story. I cried at the end. >.< Anywho, loved the characters, fell in love with both Dom and Casey. It was a great read. :)

The story is well detailed I love it! I can't wait to read more.

One and only one thing bothers me. You're finishing sentences with no punctuation.

Just a quick example. I took the first sentence I could see: "I want a fix"

You can't end a sentence with a quotation mark only. "I want a fix."

You probably don't really care either since you wrote this like a bajillion years ago, but I just felt the need to say it.

If you don't give a crap, that's fine too.

I hope this doesn't make me come off as rude, because that is not my intentions at all. Just some constructive critisism is all. Thanks.

It's like he died. It's almost worse. For both of them. I'm terribly morose now. I almost don't want to read the "epilogue" because I'm afraid it'll get worse. I need fluff to cheer me up. Please send me in the direction of the nearest fluff.

Even more brutal.

Brutal.

"It's better to burn out than fade away" Definitely a Kurt Cobain quote. Being from Washington you're required to know random facts about the grunge era.

Dom is a dick!

jesus christ, it's only the second book, writing, whatever, thats ever made me cry..
i can't even stop now, (i feel pathetic now..)

But really really beautifully, fantastic writing. It just pops out, all the pain in the piece, all the love, all the hate and everything thats in it.

I am pruly, utterly and totally speechless.. its unbelievable incredible :*.

That was freaking awesome. Must be my angst-loving side speaking, but in all seriousness, I haven't cried over a fic for a long time. Thank you so much for sharing such a friggin' amazing piece of work.

I ** hate you. i just cried for over 20 minutes and it just won`t stop. My throat is hurting, my stomach is an aching knot...and I can`t stop crying. That was too sad...too ** sad...i have no further words.

For some reason all the stories I have been reading lately have made me cry and from the beginning I knew this one would be no different. I did my best to hold the tears in but at chapter 17 I couldn't hold it back anymore. I truly applaud you for the amazing job you did and I really felt for Casey but I know he had to get away from Dom for the best.

this was just so beautiful. and so sad.