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the jazz
2008-03-23
ch 16,
abuseoh, dude, that was a perfect end. i really wish i knew dom's side of the whole story. i can't wait for the next chapter...!
nomy
2008-03-13
ch 16,
abuseyou end with that??..how mean..now Dom will think Casey love Jordan or some sort..i hope you update soon..if not i will might kill somebody with this chapter ending you just made..(i dont want to kill you cause then who will write it, right?..)
Inkspilled
2008-03-11
ch 16,
abuseomg, ur good with cliffhangers, haha. update soon. and about the review reply, i dunno where they got that part for the song, for sure, but in that song it relates more to alcohol than to fame. (called Martini Kiss lol)
Liviania
2008-03-10
ch 16,
abuseSo Casey took some of the acid?

Overall, I rather liked this chapter - it gave an interesting insight into Casey's past. Can't believe this is almost done . . .

Livi
Pryor
2008-03-08
ch 16,
abuseikes--that last line's gotta sting. as much as i hate to, i feel bad for dom. i really can't wait to see how this story ends! i'll be waiting impatiently for your updates :)
WriterGurl123
2008-03-07
ch 16,
abuseOuch! That's gotta hurt like hell. Then again, maybe it's something that Dom should experience-he's hurting Casey and doesn't even notice. Maybe Casey should hurt him, it just might open up his eyes.
Lunar Chasmodai
2008-03-07
ch 16,
abuseOoh...that was...

Well that was cruel...

But lovely! Ah, the angst and sadness that follows C-boi around. Tragic, really. Now update so there can be more pain.

Lots more.

Kudos.
Mademoiselle Rouge
2008-03-07
ch 16,
abuseHey! Don't say you hate this chapter, coz that's not true. I find it really good. And the end's really good :D
Can't wait for more ;)
Mademoiselle Rouge
2008-03-03
ch 15,
abuseThis story is so depressing - but really good.
I used to love Dom, but now even though I still do, I hate him so much too.
I've got this horrible feeling that they're all **, but I can't help hoping. PUT THEM IN REHAB! ;)
Please update soon !
Liviania
2008-02-11
ch 15,
abuseOh, that's a sad ending. Sad chapter really, but that last bit is a blow.

Livi
WriterGurl123
2008-02-10
ch 15,
abuseI'm a new reader and I have to say that this is amazing! I picture everything in my head, what the characters look like and everything.

I feel so bad for Casey, I mean Dom is just screwing him over. I've really become attached to Casey and I feel his pain. It just hurts, to read how he gets stepped on and played and he's not doing anything about it.

Well, Post More Soon!
Inkspilled
2008-02-09
ch 15,
abuseAww. There's this Senses Fail song that goes "burn out, not fade away" it just reminded me of that. :P It's a fairly depressing chapter. XD Keep Updating it just got interesting at the end. :)
nomy
2008-01-11
ch 13,
abusei were reading your story and to tell you the truth im getting frustrated..just like come on CASEY!! leave him!
why the hell ?? because Jordan he stay?? Jordan is dead SO get away from DOM!or he say he loves Dom..like so what? Dom is and idiotic jerk person.. i know it your story and all but its damn depressing!! and now Casey done drugs what a great friend is DOM! idiot!! i know he has some issue but come on!! its like so frustrating, and you kinda make him has some feelings for Casey... but seriously i also want him to be with Casey but make him fix his ** together! i wish Casey has the balls to go away for a while and get a normal life or something..and Caleb injured his hand? i see Dom playing the guitar again i assume?...

ok enough ranting..
i do love your story and i truly like it and not like being hypocritical or something..but just make the story move !! make Casey happy or make Dom sad ..its not fair to love a jerk who doesnt feel anything! ..
Liviania
2008-01-05
ch 14,
abuseVery angsty . . . also, smooth transistion between the points of view. (Sorry for the short review.)

Livi
give.me.back.my.drumsticks
2008-01-03
ch 14,
abuseI really like it good plot line.But I really hope you update soon. It' intrigueing, i have no idea if that's the best word to use or not, but it's going somewhere, i hope.
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