I think this is simple and short but nice. I think more details would have made it a little nicer but it was good nonetheless.

Good job.

Twilight Starr

It wasn't very strong for me. It sounded more like stating facts and then asking a question rather than a poem. But the idea was good.

-Miss Boo

This is very cute! Your flow could use some work, but whose couldn't? I especially like the last stanza.

Short, sweet, and to the point. Nice, I liked it. :)