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| Hazelnut-Romance 2008-08-17 ch 1,  | abusesweet. |
| gulistanlik 2008-07-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is absolutely sweet! It may be a little cliched, but the way you wrote it, I don't know how, you did not have me groaning at the cliche. And for that, I thank you (again! yes!). Whoot! You're like the one-shot queen. Hehe. Must check out your other fics! gulistanlik P.S. I've just read Piper's Hidden Kiss so I'm going to move onto review that right now. |
| righthere431 2008-07-07 ch 1, | abuseaw that was such a cute story! =] |
| mariakay 2008-06-30 ch 1, | abuseAnother well written one shot. Romeo and Juliet quotes were well used in the story. This story had a good flow to it. Telling a girl she cries beautifully, my favorite line in that. Well you didn't say it like that, but that was my favorite. Ferris Wheel, helping her conquer her fear. That was an adorable ending. Well done. |
| sahara 2008-06-16 ch 1, anon. | abusefantastic, your writing improves with each story of yours i read. I honestly hope you do get published, as a fellow hopeful publisher i know how difficult the pricess is. All the best Kate x |
| shy green rock 2008-06-04 ch 1, | abuseOMG this is the cutest story I've read by far, and I mean ONESHOTs and STORIES put together. Nicely written and organized. I am in love with both the characters. Aww so awesome! |
| Shanna 2008-03-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseHow did I miss this? Very cute. I want someone to like me enough to want to find out about me. Like this. . . not is a stalker like fashion. LOL. Anyway good story, and I saw you updated them in Piper's Hidden Kiss, I think that is what drew me to this story. |
| miscellanea 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuseThat was sweet, I wonder if guys like that actually exist... |
| Camelia Sinensis 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseSweet, even though it's a lil' bit cliché. I call it dreaming, actually. |
| d666lisa 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseYou've never seen A Cinderella Story have you (note the sarcasm) :-D At points you contridicted yourself (eg ' But Gemma had never gone to one. She did when she was younger and two of her older brothers were in high school and played for the football team but she hadn’t gotten in the past few years') A good story overall though. :-) |
| Tecna 2007-12-26 ch 1, | abuseLol! A fabulous ending! Absolutely superb one-shot, brilliant work and well laid out. Flows perfectly and the story-line is fantastic as well the character portrayal. In other words: I loved it! Tecna ;) |
| AquanneSilver 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseAww, that last sentence made me grin so much! Loved it. |
| katie valentine 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abuseif this isn't sweet, then I don't know what is! Lol. I loved tbis. Ahh gosh I wish I was her! Hahahah. |
| x3life 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseaw loved this one-shot it was so cute =) with the happy ending and clique and everythingg!! |
| mia5081 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseAw, so cute :D ~Mia |