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| chrissayyy 2008-09-15 ch 1,  | abuseAww, that was really, really, really sweet! I loved it:) |
| found.eventually 2008-02-28 ch 2, | abuseYou would have to work slightly on the finishing touches, but sure, why not? I mean, your story flowed pretty much flawlessly, and it's sweet. Maybe add a little more details about their backgrounds or something? :) |
| Jevanminx 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseAw so cute. I love 10 Things I Hate About You, so it just made this story all the better. JM |
| dawnimoya 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abusehmm, i love the plot of this, even though it's quite simple. it's short and sweet. however, do work on fine details and grammar/spelling. iron out the little creases and you'll have a terrific story in no time! :) cheers!! |
| anitsirK 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abuseWow... |
| xxily4everxx 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseaww! wat a cute story!! |
| SkyFallOuch 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abusehaha I was just stumbling around and I read this. It was very simple and sweet. -Sigh- it would be nice to have a guy that's always there for you...too bad my other friend is not inspiring me by breaking up with a guy in a matter of seconds! =O Aw I loved it! Lol, I'm still adored by it...I think I'm going to read it again. xD |
| Kaede Kitsurani 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseAw, short and sweet. It was great! =) |
| Cittywolf 2007-12-17 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely love it. It reminds me of how i told the guy i like, that I like him, but without the “ 7. you said I want him to love me as much as I love him, and I want to tell you something everything you said was true about how guys can be mean and show offs but I love you more than anything in this world” I got rejected. Boo hoo. Anyway, it's difficult to write this review because I don't know how to express just how much your story is moving. Ug, I hate it when I can't express something. This is beautiful. Its as simple as that. Cittywolf |
| x3life 2007-12-11 ch 1, | abuseaww really cute one-shot!! |
| angels and airwaves 2007-12-11 ch 1, | abuse"I want him to be you." Oh gosh, I think I just melted into a puddle right there. :) Well done! |
| Lily Llynn 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseThis excessiveness of lowercase letters at the beginning of sentences is bugging me a bit, and the writing's a bit not sophisticated, but this is still cute and sweet and adorable, and I'm so glad artistic dreamer suggested so now I can add it to my c2. (: |
| CarnivalGirl346 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseSo Cute! Loved #1 |
| fictitious facades 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abuseThat's so adorable. I love it. |
| Wicca Girl 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseI LUV IT SO GOING ON FAVS |