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| hija de jesucristo 2008-07-01 ch 1,  | abusehehehe funny this is cute! is there more? i like it is good! |
| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseAwh this is cute- cool idea |
| Terrance Riverdarb 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseIt's a bit--I can't find the word--but it made me grin my head anyway. If I were to nitpick, I would complain about the amount of dialog and lack of everything else, but it's just a one shot. For what it's worth, I think the little bit of narration in there was handled well. |
| Maranwe Telrunya 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseAww, cute. It seemed kinda incomplete, though. Needs to be continued. :) Even though it is a oneshot... ~Maranwe |
| Needa S 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseInteresting! Great job. Hope to see more soon. |
| JennieMR 2007-09-06 ch 1, | abuseAw, I like this. It's very sweet .:D |
| Cass Boothe 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseThis looks like it could be good. Keep it up. |