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The Jynx of Kari 2007-10-13 . chapter 1
::I still think on my

while my thoughts caress an idea of a new.::
-They sound off.

Well, this is quite what we all feel one time or another. To wish to think straight, rather that go in circles over one little thing, obsessing over it till others see it.

Love you!
__Kari
AuraBorealis 2007-08-26 . chapter 1
intresting
hey maria 2007-08-26 . chapter 1
It's an original idea, having circles in your head you need to turn to squares. I think the rhymes sound a little awkward, so work on that. Other than that, it was nice.
Princess-anna57 2007-08-26 . chapter 1
Interesting. I like it. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^
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