::of a wate, and twice your worth of woe::
Waste.

Well this is a sad poem Shookie. Wish that somethings can just go away and that we move on.=3
__Kari

Thats great.I just have one thing I want you to think about, when you say sorry doesnt fix everything your right...kinda. Sometimes its all thats really needed
and allo that can be said.



-Twilight Wolf6

Your ideas are rich and your words are strong. Work with them, feed them as much knowledge and emotion as you can. Great job here.

It's a good poem. Not the best, but pretty good. Maybe it just didn't move me the way other poems do. I don't know. But keep writing, there are lots of people out there that will like it.

--Miss Boo