::or is it more a one-daye exploring?::
You mean day? Heh... HAHAHHAHAHA! Bold, bold words from my shookie monster! XD This is awesomly turning. but with poems like this, can you Italic or Bold the title before the poem? might help a bit.

__kari

This was another good poem. It reminds me of a poem I wrote one time called cliche`.

What I like most about your poems are that they aren't beautified to a difficult vocabulary- nothing against those poems, they're good, too- But for a poem that is trying to express something easily, it's great.

Question, when you had, "or is it more a one-daye exploring?" Did you mean 'daye' or 'day'?

C.S.