Skip me, whip me with your soft eye caress (Very nice opposition)

Not bad >_

::Skip me, whip me with your soft eye caress::

I fell in love with that line. xD It's just... O.o you know. =3
And this one's short, but to the point. A style I like. And you know what, I totally still need to catch up to reviewing you and keeping up with your genius love!!

__Kari

good work

Thanks for this.

This was quite a humourous poem. I didn't understand it at first, but eventually did when I read on. I found the words in the poem a great description for the poem. It seemed as though the narrator of the poem felt like they were creeping to do everything.

C.S.