very good. full of action and great tense atmosphere until the last few words! great! fran ~*~

Teehee. The ending was funny. Sort of like those popups..."YOU'RE THE 100,0 VISITOR!"

very well written but I didn't get the point!

it is ok. i have never much liked japanese animi or naruto though. and you could have always just added onto it if you wanted to after the contest