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fire-breathing-kitten
2007-08-26
ch 2,
abuseRed eyes and red hair? Oh my...hee, I like the voice you've given your narrator, very amusing. And Addy does sound scary. :_
fire-breathing-kitten
2007-08-26
ch 1,
abuseCute prologue...I like the names of the two boys, very appropriately chosen.
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