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| fatbird33 2008-03-09 ch 1,  | abuseaww this is so sweet, but the whole 'high' friend thing was a little odd, i know it had to rhyme, but maybe a better rhyme. oh wait ops you're talking about god never mind. nice work hey check out the review marathon! |
| LittleDoe 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseVery short, consise, and revealing. It's an amazing truth. Well written. Good job. God bless you! ~LittleDoe |
| notwritten 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abusevery true |
| Needa S 2007-09-17 ch 1, | abuseAmazing write. Beautifully done! Write on. |
| Captain Lucky 2007-08-30 ch 1, | abuseSimple, but elegant. I love it. By the way, I really appreciated your review. I'll try to be faster at returning them... |
| AuthorNinjaEarth 2007-08-30 ch 1, | abuseThis sounds more like a proverb; one that is extremely profound but true. The impact on this poem is obvious, which I why I believe you made it so short. I love it and thanks for sharing it with us. Excellent work! |