It's very pretty, but it seems to me like a very long run on sentence. Break it up and have more sentence variation. That way it will be easier to pay more attention to the actual words. :-)

Wow. That was astonishingly brilliant. Really beautiful and deep and harsh on a world that completely deserves harshness.

the Stranger in the moonlight

Stunning. With a capital S.

This is like, unbelievable. You've rendered me speechless.

For so long I've been trying to write something like this, but now I realize that nothing can compare to this poem. You've made this piece your own, and it shows. Well done!

That was a nice poem. It is hard to measure beauty when there is no proper instrument to measure it with.

SirScott

Beautiful poem. I'm so glad you updated!

Rowan.

I've always loved the way you describe things - there's so much colour in your words, so much emotions. I enjoyed reading this very much.

wow...I completely agree with every word in that poem and your poetry makes mine look like preschool work...that definitely got the reaction you were aiming for :)

This is the poem I've been trying to produce as long as I have been able to write. You have everything in it and I'm so completely envious of it, my god. Kudos times 100. This is by far your best. I'm sure you'll top it somehow but I think this will always be my favorite.

This was beautiful.