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caralita
2007-09-21
ch 1,
abusewhy are you so amazing?
glimpses from an ivory towe...
2007-09-03
ch 1,
abuse"-by a pain that rapes her and tells her who she is.
Dresses her in gowns of oleander-
in garments that don't allow her to breathe."

Brutal imagery. A biting satire on society's cruel determination to pigeon-hole individuals. Raw, poignant, real.

In the words of Keats, "Poetry should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts, and appear almost a remembrance." As such, I once again feel obligated to thank you for writing.
Luna Turner
2007-08-30
ch 1,
abuseDepressing... LOVE IT! Just playing. Seriously. Nice job.
Faith Adeline
2007-08-28
ch 1,
abuseexcellent poem. you write well, it flows awesomely. Keep it up.
Faith
lilyqueen777
2007-08-28
ch 1,
abuseWow this is a lovely poem, and I can especially relate to this as well!


this is wonderful imagery, and totally a poem on my fav. list =]
Stella Grimshaw.
2007-08-27
ch 1,
abuse. Tattooes spat
on and etched on by sting- by a pain
that rapes her and tells her who she is.
Dresses her in gowns of oleander-
in garments that don't allow her to breathe.

I'm not quite sure why but those lines awoke something in me. I'm not sure if it's inspiration or just wonder, but I absolutely adore them.
LadderInMyTights
2007-08-27
ch 1,
abuseGreat job. I don't even know what to say...and I usually fill these boxes with nonsense..
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