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| caralita 2007-09-21 ch 1,  | abusewhy are you so amazing? |
| glimpses from an ivory towe... 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuse"-by a pain that rapes her and tells her who she is. Dresses her in gowns of oleander- in garments that don't allow her to breathe." Brutal imagery. A biting satire on society's cruel determination to pigeon-hole individuals. Raw, poignant, real. In the words of Keats, "Poetry should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts, and appear almost a remembrance." As such, I once again feel obligated to thank you for writing. |
| Luna Turner 2007-08-30 ch 1, | abuseDepressing... LOVE IT! Just playing. Seriously. Nice job. |
| Faith Adeline 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseexcellent poem. you write well, it flows awesomely. Keep it up. Faith |
| lilyqueen777 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseWow this is a lovely poem, and I can especially relate to this as well! this is wonderful imagery, and totally a poem on my fav. list =] |
| Stella Grimshaw. 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abuse. Tattooes spat on and etched on by sting- by a pain that rapes her and tells her who she is. Dresses her in gowns of oleander- in garments that don't allow her to breathe. I'm not quite sure why but those lines awoke something in me. I'm not sure if it's inspiration or just wonder, but I absolutely adore them. |
| LadderInMyTights 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abuseGreat job. I don't even know what to say...and I usually fill these boxes with nonsense.. |