Reviews for the circular intent of kissing and traffic

Stella Grimshaw. 2007-10-10 ch 1,	abuseI'm in love with your writing, simple as that.
clockwork Kiss 2007-09-21 ch 1,	abusei love it. i love the circle theme (shows how human thought stems away from something and then comes back to it), and "chewed away". very neat and perfectly composed little piece. a couple of really bright images, too. "tarot card" especially. thanks for sharing.
cocaine and cherries 2007-09-07 ch 1,	abusejdkslajda. whatever, i'm a moron. you, darlin', are a genius.
hey maria 2007-08-27 ch 1,	abuseI really like the way the themes of brakes and lipstick interact. And the last two lines.
she smolders 2007-08-27 ch 1,	abuseThe last two lines seem to resonate within me, and I can't get them out of my head. Take care.
painting andromeda 2007-08-26 ch 1,	abuseThis is beautiful. The spacing and punctuation and eveything makes it come to life. Great feat.