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Stella Grimshaw.
2007-10-10
ch 1,
abuseI'm in love with your writing, simple as that.
clockwork Kiss
2007-09-21
ch 1,
abusei love it. i love the circle theme (shows how human thought stems away from something and then comes back to it), and "chewed away". very neat and perfectly composed little piece. a couple of really bright images, too. "tarot card" especially. thanks for sharing.
cocaine and cherries
2007-09-07
ch 1,
abusejdkslajda.

whatever, i'm a moron.

you, darlin', are a genius.
hey maria
2007-08-27
ch 1,
abuseI really like the way the themes of brakes and lipstick interact. And the last two lines.
she smolders
2007-08-27
ch 1,
abuseThe last two lines seem to resonate within me, and I can't get them out of my head. Take care.
painting andromeda
2007-08-26
ch 1,
abuseThis is beautiful. The spacing and punctuation and eveything makes it come to life. Great feat.
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