 Stella Grimshaw. 2007-10-10 . chapter 1I'm in love with your writing, simple as that. |
 clockwork kiss 2007-09-21 . chapter 1i love it. i love the circle theme (shows how human thought stems away from something and then comes back to it), and "chewed away". very neat and perfectly composed little piece. a couple of really bright images, too. "tarot card" especially. thanks for sharing. |
 i'll ask the stars above 2007-09-07 . chapter 1jdkslajda.
whatever, i'm a moron.
you, darlin', are a genius. |
 hey maria 2007-08-27 . chapter 1I really like the way the themes of brakes and lipstick interact. And the last two lines. |
 she smolders 2007-08-27 . chapter 1The last two lines seem to resonate within me, and I can't get them out of my head. Take care. |
 painting andromeda 2007-08-26 . chapter 1This is beautiful. The spacing and punctuation and eveything makes it come to life. Great feat. |