I'm in love with your writing, simple as that.

i love it. i love the circle theme (shows how human thought stems away from something and then comes back to it), and "chewed away". very neat and perfectly composed little piece. a couple of really bright images, too. "tarot card" especially. thanks for sharing.

jdkslajda.

whatever, i'm a moron.

you, darlin', are a genius.

I really like the way the themes of brakes and lipstick interact. And the last two lines.

The last two lines seem to resonate within me, and I can't get them out of my head. Take care.

This is beautiful. The spacing and punctuation and eveything makes it come to life. Great feat.