WOWWWWWWWW that is a very VERY deep poem...are you sure you're male? LOL J/K this is a great poem and you are an awesome writer:)

This one takes the cake. WOW!

I like it...I get a very innocent and pure feeling when I read it...keep it up :)

Sweet, I especially like the last line. Abstract, with a repeating theme. Did you write this for someone special?::winks::