I like the bolded/italics/underline and the emotions. It's a really cool style. Great work.

-STIX-

aw sadly delicious. I love it. Good detail!

Let me tell you why I love this poem... It's because it's REAL. Instead of making it just another sad love poem, you add details in it that lets the reader know more about the relationship. When I know those little details, like the ferris wheel, and the song, it makes all the difference cuz I imagine that I can feel the person's pain. "How I can never look at her the same way/ especially since you dumped me for her" also got to me because it showed that the boyfriend left her for someone the both of them knew. I'm thinking that it's a friend of her's?
Another reason why this poem captured my attention, was because that I could totally relate to it. "What went wrong? What's wrong with me?" is exactly what was running through my mind. I also liked how you used bold, italics, and underlining to put more emphasis on certain words. Good job!