I get the distinct sensation you would (or do) have extreme thoughts about Nietzsche.

It was like funny but couldn't be in the 'funny' section...but that's not the flaw here. It can't be an 'erotic' story either..just a sneak into the minds of typical young adults, and it describes each charaters well and also sounds good. Somehow there's a niggling feeling that I can't figure out...

Did that one girl's father have sleep apnea or something? Oh, and was this an erotic story? That's pretty much what I got out of it...
Have you ever heard of a game called frank's adventure? I'll tell you about it sometime or something.