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| chochang913 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseI get the distinct sensation you would (or do) have extreme thoughts about Nietzsche. |
| Gogoh 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseIt was like funny but couldn't be in the 'funny' section...but that's not the flaw here. It can't be an 'erotic' story either..just a sneak into the minds of typical young adults, and it describes each charaters well and also sounds good. Somehow there's a niggling feeling that I can't figure out... |
| I.O.K.O 2007-08-30 ch 1, | abuseDid that one girl's father have sleep apnea or something? Oh, and was this an erotic story? That's pretty much what I got out of it... Have you ever heard of a game called frank's adventure? I'll tell you about it sometime or something. |