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from beneath the bell jar 2007-08-27 . chapter 1
Honestly I don't understand most of it, but I wish I did. But even still I enjoyed it because there were so many great lines like "We came home from the mall with matching eating disorders
Mine was slightly more in style but I still wanted yours" and "All my friends said I was stupid, what I'm doing is a waste
I said I'm just pretending to afford expensive taste". Cool poem.
Serious Sonneteer 2007-08-27 . chapter 1
This is quite an interesting piece on a relatively trite subject matter. The first and last couplets were were well-written.

There were parts though that I felt didn't make sense, at least to me. Lines like 'We came home from the mall with matching eating disorders

Mine was slightly more in style but I still wanted yours' are one of such parts.
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