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from beneath the bell jar 2007-08-27 ch 1,	abuseWow this was great. Of course I'm tightly wound into this subject so I'm a bit biased, but this was awesome. Very abstract but understable. I loved the bit about diamond dust. Also angles and planes. Lots of great lines here,esp. the last one. You should check out some of my poems on this topic - an older one "Ugly Numbers" and one I just put up, "Endless"
changed.by.an.afterthought 2007-08-27 ch 1,	abusebeautiful. i love the way it rings in places then falls hard when u read it out loud in others. it has a very strong story behind it wanting to burst forth but it is held back by the readers want to continue the poem until...the...very...last...period and sigh of release as the story is unfolded. spectacular. - changed