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| relapse into change 2008-01-03 ch 1,  | abuseoh god the imagery of this poem was amazing i can't even point out my favorite line because all of them were beautiful, amazig job |
| Splutz 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseLine 4: "cause" or "'cause"? Quite a fascinating character. |
| AmorphousHeart 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful BEAUTIFUL imagery! |
| Forever Forbidden 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abuseNice. the whole idea portrayed by pens and writing is really good. |
| from beneath the bell jar 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abuseWow this is impressive.I had to read it through a few times to really get it but now that I have I really really like it. Very abstract, very cool wording. For instance "his smoke puffs beautifully through the toxic air in intricate dedications to my heart" and "boring welts along my forehead with espresso eyes". The whole thing was pretty amazing. Very intriguing title by the way. Adding to my c2. Maybe you could read my poem "Endless". |