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| RedXfire 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseWell that was extreamly well written and the peaices could not fit any more perfect *Good* for nothing is perfect good job |
| their wingless angel 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abusei love it...my favorite lines are: now you stand in slow motion (so i would assume) atop a mound of bloody sugar... its so full of pictures...i can see the whole poem |
| from beneath the bell jar 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is a really cool piece - like I said, I love abstract pieces. The first line here was perfect - intriguing and poetic. I also loved "guess it don't matter cause it's drizzling stained glass" and "now you stand in slow motion (so i would assume)". Awesome piece. Going in my c2. |