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RedXfire
2007-08-29
ch 1,
abuseWell that was extreamly well written and the peaices could not fit any more perfect *Good* for nothing is perfect


good job
their wingless angel
2007-08-28
ch 1,
abusei love it...my favorite lines are:
now you stand in slow motion (so i would assume)
atop a mound of bloody sugar...

its so full of pictures...i can see the whole poem
from beneath the bell jar
2007-08-27
ch 1,
abuseThis is a really cool piece - like I said, I love abstract pieces. The first line here was perfect - intriguing and poetic. I also loved "guess it don't matter cause it's drizzling stained glass" and "now you stand in slow motion (so i would assume)". Awesome piece. Going in my c2.
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