This is so sad. Good song.

Twilight Starr

good work.

I like this better as a poem than a song. I love the emotion in this. Great Work!

Kristie Marie

Ah... that made me cry. That was so poignant and heartbreaking and so easily relatable... I'm not sure if that's a word, but you know what I mean... Great use of repetition; it added to the effect. Love it. -Qzie

This one really took my breath. It's really amazing! I especially liked the sentences: 'the girl who was standing - under the rain, she.. - was frozen as you vanished' Loved it, it will go into my favorites! And, thanks for your review on my piece 'go'!

Awesome song. :) Great great! Write on.

Anna _