So many powerful images captured in words. Very lovely. Thank you for sharing.

Your writing is really amazing. I am completely in love with this poem. You write so well. I love every similie. It all fits. It seems complicated but it's so simple and it's so lovely and powerful.

I love your penname too, by the way. After all, for great writing such as this, all you need is ink and introspection.

that's a nice imagery, my favorite part is the second paragraph.