Nice description.Last stanza's really sad,you should give him a chance.
Oh you have typo in "Yill you're full of it".It should be "till"

My mom only lets me drink every so often. She says I have an addictive personality. Anyhow. This is sad. My dad's parents were alcoholics, so he doesn't drink. I don't know what it's like. Anyhow. There were a few mistakes. Yill you're full of it, ha ha. Stuff that I usually do. Been writing terrible poetry but loving it because its real. That's what we do. I don't know who the we is, but..Anyhow. Good job. THERES STILL NO PERIOD AT THE END AND IT DRIVES ME CRAZY BECAUSE IT'S INCOMPLETE, but have a nice day.