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iCorpseGringer
2008-10-04
ch 13,
abuseThis was an awesome chapter. I freakin love/hate Jayden
He needs to get with Jacob already...
Please update soon i can't wait.
AlwaysForTheGay
2008-09-30
ch 13,
abuseJalapeno is amazing. Battle to the death for kidnapping rights?

Song(s): Ich brech aus--Tokio Hotel

Drink(s): Dr. Pepper

Name(s): Cassius

Color(s): Black, and some un-nameable colors I see in my head when listening to music (lol what? Slight synethesia.)

Letter(s): Er. Z?

Pet (And/Or) Animal(s): DRAGON (they exist Dx). Okay, cat.

Food(s): Pizza

Book(s): I can't pick a favorite. Most of my favorites are on FP anyway, and unfinished. :3
Solarfox
2008-09-21
ch 13,
abuseOMFG I have never laughed so hard in my life. I effing love Jayden with a passion. If he was real we would so be best friends. I usually critique people but hell this shit is awesome. UPDATE WHENEVER
Cracked Butterfruit
2008-09-19
ch 13,
abuseYou know, I am so in love with Tomas. Like with his name and his angriness (I love angry people). He wanders around in my inner peripheral and makes me giggle. and JAYDEN IS THE BEST NUTCASE IN THE WORLD. No debates.

Song(s): I dont know.

Drink(s): I don't know.

Name(s): I've always been fond of Oliver.

Color(s): I don't know.

Letter(s): P, A, N, T, I, E, and S.

Pet (And/Or) Animal(s): Dogs.

Food(s): I don't know.

Book(s): THE PRINCESS BRIDE

Contest Number One: Jayden saw an army of ants. He stamped them dead under Tomas's favourite shoes. It was outstanding fun.

I love you! Yey! Hoorah! Update!
Duuude
2008-09-18
ch 13,
abuseHaha. Your answers were hilarious. Your friends make me laugh especially the one that said I love you. xD
Anyway cool chapter. The "gay sex" was so nonchalant and sudden that I almost skipped over it. Unfortunately I never really read word-for-word, which I should. T_T
And the characters you chose, I loved some too! I like the main character from Details, Cass is amazing!
btw, your idea of giving us activities in reviews is pretty cool, it gives people who don`t know what to right something to say.


Contest Number One:

Jayden was skipping home from school one day, when he saw an army of ants preparing for ... attack? Jayden was shocked, he hadn't noticed them at first since he was busy thinking about Michael Waltrip and how cute he was.
He tried to talk the little ants out of it. "Violence is wrong," he said.
The ants refused to negotiate. They marched onwards to their destination: giving an ultimatum to the grasshoppers.
"If you don't move out of our territory, we WILL use force."
Jayden pleaded and begged. He insisted that they could talk it out.
Tomas stomped outside to see what his stupid brother was up to.
"What the hell are you doing?" He asked.
"The ants! I don't know what to do! There's so much! They won't listen to me!"
Tomas glared at him and then at the ants. He walked over to Jayden and the ants and proceeded to stomp their lives away.
Jayden spluttered and gaped in shock. "NO!"
Tomas glared some more and then stomped back into the house with a slam of the door.
THE END.

Hehee. Poor ants. I know you said sentence or paragraph but I wrote a story. Which isn't very creative but I love Tomas so I wanted to inlcude him.


Question Number Three:

Song- I have no idea, I like Lost by Coldplay

Drink- I love berry punch juiceboxes from minute maid, I'm addicted

Name- Mine! It's Angela. I like Spanish names too, pronunciation and all.

Color- I like purple, my room's painted purple.

Letter- I never really thought about it but I'd say I or A, since those are both my initials and the letters my two names begin with.

Pet- Oh. Snakes, cats, guinea pigs, bunnies, and other cute ones.

Food- I'd say chocolate.

Book- I could never have a favourite book. I don't really read books too much anymore, more fictionpress.


Anyway! That was fun! =)
Projectile Cupcakes
2008-09-12
ch 13,
abuseI think the Chase chapters are the best, he always does something perverted, and we can just assume where my mind lives (Dirtyguttersville!)

So if you could imagine some creepy yet super sexy way for me to thank you for this awesome chapter (causing I'm so giving) lay it on me!

AND Oh my goshness! I'm glad you like Dori! *evil snickers* Now I have to hold him ransom in competition for your love!

OMEEGEE'S I love questions!

What is your favorite…

Song(s):Everything ever written or preformed by Bill Kaulitz of Tokio Hotel

Drink(s):Ginger ale mixed with fruit punch! Cause its gots bubbles!

Name(s): Amy (totally unsexy)

Color(s):Everything in the rainbow plus silver

Letter(s): X, because I love kisses (Screw hugs!)

Pet (And/Or) Animal(s): They have all died (I'm a horrible caretaker)But I ultimately aim to raise a tiger *rawl*

Food(s):CUP-CAKES!

Book(s):Forever Dawn by Stephine Meyer, The Husband, by Dean Koontz, First Person Plural by Cameron West, and all my horrible text books (I actually have to read them *cries*)
Yrvin Thornhart
2008-09-10
ch 13,
abuse(grins) You're right. This fic is an original when it comes to attacks. I fucking love it. Just the right kind of light and funny. Makes my days in work seem interesting when I think about this. (Really, it does!) Hope you update soon! (wriggles eyebrows)
Lauren
2008-09-04
ch 13, anon.
abusei actually love him.
if i pay you in cookies, do you think you could make me a clone in real life?

thank you! :P
xx
Da-c0nfu53d-1
2008-08-31
ch 13,
abuseJayden should've told Chase to lock the door, instead of just closing it.
Tomas is insane but I love him.
Q3 is too long for my sleepy brain.
~D@-c0nfu53d-1
LizzleShizzle
2008-08-29
ch 13,
abuseOMG i so LOVE this story :3 its absolutley fantastic
tihagro
2008-08-29
ch 13,
abuseOMG I love this story
kitty.xo
2008-08-26
ch 8,
abuseI'm reading all of this story in one sitting so far and OMG it is SO AMAZING. I was going to wait till the last chapter and write a long review then but I decided to write one now anyway because JAYDEN IS AMAZING AND I LOVE HIM AND I WISH HE WAS REAL AND NOT A FICTIONAL CHARACTER *HUGS JAYDEN* he's one of the greatest characters I've read. ever. he's amazing. I'm, like, in awe of Jayden's amazingness and he is SO CUTE! :D You have created the most amazing character ever ;) LOVE JAYDEN! And he's penguin flip-flops
MUMSI
2008-08-26
ch 13,
abuseHee! Jayden wins at life!
RaVeN-naILs
2008-08-25
ch 13,
abusehey, i finally read it! yay! and once again I loved it! update sooner!
~RaVeN-naILs
Catseye*Rose
2008-08-24
ch 13,
abuseI'm kinda surprised Tomas hasn't killed anyone yet. It's only a matter of time... Ha, and Jayden's exploring more! Hm...he should probably be more careful :P But at least he and Jacob have made up!
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