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cue.dramatic.gasp. 2008-07-02 ch 11,	abuseUpdate it fast! I really want to see what happens with Brian and who she chooses: Raymond or Jayden. In truth, I can't decide either. At first, I was like: definitely Raymond. But I saw Jayden's point of view and decided he was pretty nice as well. So keep going!
D-Mish 2008-02-24 ch 11,	abuseNO! I LOVE BRIAN! CRIES How could you do such a thing? :( Good chapter though. I feel like your dripping on a little bit. But good job.
xHUGx 2008-02-24 ch 11, anon.	abuseJust realized you updated. And, whoa. Short chapter there. Thanks for updating, nevertheless. There's nothing much to say about this chapter, since it's so short and all, but it's sad to hear/see that Brian has such short time to live. Well, we don't know the extent, but from the way things are going, I'm guessing that you're going to take his character out of your story in the next few chapters? Aw. He was starting to sound awesome. Ah. Jayden and Raymond. I got confused and forgot who and who. It's been such a long time since I've read this story! Hopefully your chapters are quicker, once school is being less stressful and good luck with your personal life. That can get out of hand quickly. ;P
Hydie 2008-02-23 ch 11,	abuseaww... :)
Venus Smurf1 2008-02-23 ch 11,	abuseBeautiful chapter! I'm so very glad that you updated, though I'm heartbroken over Brian. I don't want the poor guy to die! He's too cool for that. Brilliantly done, though, and I can't wait for the next part!
under the bed 2008-02-23 ch 11,	abuseDun dun dun DUN! Suspense!
outsidersgirl 2008-02-23 ch 11,	abusei love brian it will be very sad where he does go
Megaroonie 2008-02-22 ch 11, anon.	abuseAMAZING! it gives me butterflies like never before(: but the chapters are kinda short.
StrawberryKisses08 2008-01-21 ch 10,	abuseGAH! I dunno WHO I want her to end up with ;_;
xHUGx 2008-01-19 ch 10, anon.	abuseShe's confused, and they're both two amazing guys. But I think the better turning point would be that she won't be with either of them. It seems right, but I won't complain if she's with Jayden. (: I like Raymond, but it's more appropriate, I think, if she's with her best friend. But you can ruin that, if you want. Meh. Anyway, yes, I'm curious to how you're going to continue this. I just suddenly remembered why I loathed love triangles. I always get confused and frustrated because the two main guys circling the heroine are sweetie pies. Jeez. Ugh. Update soon?
xHUGx 2008-01-19 ch 8, anon.	abuseDAMN, that boy has time to write. That was cute, I admit. I don't know, though... I really think that she should be with Jayden, but at the same time, it doesn't seem like she deserves him. "But, that’s the thing I learned…never wait around the corner. If you love somebody, tell them. Go after them like there’s no tomorrow and make sure they know how important they are to you." ...Please tell me that she's not going to use that as some kind of sign to go after Raymond. Ugh, whatever... Next chapter.
xHUGx 2008-01-19 ch 7, anon.	abuseOh flippin' CRAP. Two things: “Why would I?” He asked her in a genuinely worried tone and kissed her on the forehead. “All you did was tell her the truth.” CAN YOU SAY SWOON? Swoon. Swoon times five hundred and six. God, that was adorable. Okay, so maybe she's falling for Raymond. Right. I'll steal Jayden or something. Ugh, and two: What the FREAKING HELL? BRIAN HAS LEUKEMIA? I admit, that was a very good way to tell Kim about it. I was surprised too. But that was so SUDDEN. I think you gotta slow it down. They should have spent more time together so that she'll care more about him, or something, because it seems that he's still the type of "friend, but not really friend". Unless he has no one else to tell (but he could tell his cousin, duh?). Next chapter.
xHUGx 2008-01-19 ch 6, anon.	abuseOoh. They're getting quite close. Whatever happened to Jayden? I don't like Raymond much. He's cute and awesome and all, but Jayden's her best friend. And it seems like they're not talking at all.
xHUGx 2008-01-19 ch 5, anon.	abuseQuicky. The whole fifteen reason thing was awesomely cute. I wonder what the last reason was? AND why the HELL didn't Jayden show up?! I was looking forward to that. Oh, and why is Raymond making such a huge deal that his mom caught him with a girl in his room. (...) I hope that's explained in the next chapter.
xHUGx 2008-01-19 ch 4, anon.	abuseI think that you should cut that huge paragraph where Brian's talking into smaller paragraphs because that was just . . . large. While Brian's speech is touching, I don't think he should've told Kim. I mean, sure he knows her, but that was really out of NO WHERE, and if he hasn't told anyone that before, why would he tell HER? Sure, she's nice, friendly, cute, they went out on a date . . . but surely he had a reason not to tell anyone. I bet a lot of people asked him about his life, but did he tell them? Naw. And all Kim did was ask him why he moved . . . which his whole paragraph didn't specifically answer her question. He went into detail, and that was unnecessary. He could've just said "I lived with my mom, and now I moved in with my dad." And that would've been it. It was a bit unrealistic. They should've became better friends and THEN he could have told her. I mean, his sister committed suicide. That's not something you talk about lightly to someone you barely know. Anyway... next chapter.

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