Ohh I like this. It's almost like poetry. I like how its just a train of thought, it really gets you in the head of the arsonist.

Very good, I really enjoyed this piece. It is short, yet effective, and ends off well. You also incorporated the character very nicely, and added alot of mystery and unanswered questions (which I like) into the piece. Well done. Thanks.

Well written. Some great lines in this. Excellent. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^