Reviews for AI, the pioneering sorrow

simpleplan13 2007-10-26 ch 1,	abuseI love the beginning descriptions of regret and jealousy... the rest of it is great too... especially the ending
Abdul Alhazred - John Brewe... 2007-09-15 ch 1,	abuseAwesome. As in I am in Awe. A great dissection of a scene no one's seen. Very nicely written and concise to my ear. I enjoy the brevity and impact of a single line "this is hell" as well as the shared thought of "Anything but this," Very cool, and shaved down for speed and weight. Very nice.