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Leaves of Labefaction 2008-03-15 ch 2,	abusePoor you. See, I guess we don't think the same after all. I know I am worth something. I am the most valuable thing in the world... but only because I live in my world. And I definitely am not the quiet one. I am the dangerous one. And when I try to be nice, they just push me back into my position. It is like they shoved me into a coffin that doesn't even fit, told me it was mine, nailed it shut and won't let me come out. I like this story because it is so honest, not whittling down your feelings to what the public wants to see. -LoL
Leaves of Labefaction 2008-03-15 ch 1,	abuseI relate to this a lot. And now that I have written that it will be so hard to press 'Submit Review' because it is so hard to let the world know who I am. I sometimes promise myself not to post any more of my poetry, because I don't want total strangers being let that close to my heart. And yet, I want to know if others think the way I do, or if I am just insane. I want to know if it is all just an act to them like it is to me, and I want to know why I keep pretending when I judge others for hiding. I hope this makes sense to you, but then again, it doesn't really matter. -LoL
Jessica 2007-10-01 ch 3, anon.	abuseIn my more self-serving moments, I start to believe that maybe the opposite is true, maybe they don't deserve a person like you. Someone who does all the work, yet only gets credited for what he/she does wrong. Daydreaming is a way to cope, I think. All those exciting adventures that you wish you had can be played out in your head, without risking anything of yourself. It's the only way I cope.
Jessica 2007-10-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseI find this totally relateable. Sad, really, but at least know that you aren't the only one feeling this. I think it's truly unbelievable that this reminds me so much of myself. Sorry if that sounds conceited, but it's how this makes me feel, like I'm not alone. So thank you.
ninjah-skillz 2007-08-29 ch 2,	abuseHaHA! See? I knew you wouldn't be able to resist adding something else. ^^ This is just as good as the last bit. I love it. Lovelovelove. Such a strong word. But it works. Because I do love it. ^^ I think eventually I'm going to convince you to add more and more. (: Just be warned. -C.
ninjah-skillz 2007-08-28 ch 1,	abuse1] Pshyeah. That's the kind of beginning that gets me hooked on stories. I truly hope that you update this soon. I want to see where this ends up going! 2] You may want to put the word 'me' at the very start in bold, simply because otherwise it looks like a random word, when it's the title. 3] If you don't update I shall hunt you down and force your fingers to hit the keyboard faster than you thought physically possible. 4] Yay first review!

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