I really loved this; the way you made death seem almost orgasmic. Great work.

This was also like a poem or a song. I liked it but I think I saw some grammatical errors.

man, that story was so AWESOME! you are really talented! :D you should try getting something like this published. I would definitely by a book! ;)

This is amazing and absolutely stunning. I love the visuals and I can't wait to read more!

This freaked me out beyond that which words could describe... It was just brilliant.

The last paragraph tore at my mind. Absolutely brilliant; the way you focused on the body rather than the soul resonates with the natural references, this is music where words were expected.

xx
JL
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