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| ten pts above average 2007-11-05 ch 1,  | abuseWhen I read the first line I thought for sure this was another after breakup poem.. Either way I really liked it.. And its so true.. Cheers to getting the ** outta here lol.. |
| loveYOOinADVANCE 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abusei couldn't help but review some of your poetry seen you did the same to me! ahaha i remember feeling like this! >< coz i've just finished school and i'm doing my hsc atm (i should b studying right now >< ^^; heheh well good job! ^^ keep it up! |
| Twilight Starr 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abuseGood song. ^^ ~Twilight Starr~ |
| kloun doll 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseit reminds me of my school days, a little nostalgic stuff, well, my favorite part: "I don’t think it’s hit me yet I’m not sad or scared Like I thought I’d be Its just like any other day I go to each room like I’m supposed to Joke around and laugh with my friends" but I think, the poem is short. |
| xrho 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseGreat outlook. It's a little surreal, isn't it? Knowing that everything's ending, that everything's beginning. You've captured that, simply and honestly. |
| sweets555 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abusegreat job! keep it up! |