Lovely story. I got choked up a bit at some parts! Anyways, well done. :)
- Meet the Moon

Its movng kinda fast, but its good so far.

How did you get the name Keshena? Just out of curiosity. Its native american i believe and it means something like sswift soaring eagle.

sweet job
i can't wait to see how he does it

I love this story! Everything blends so well ^_^. I look forward to the next chapter.

~Shanna~

O! Another cool chapter! Update ASAP! YAY! :-D

sunflowersing

you're doing a great job so far. lovin' it! I love dragons!Lol

Wow! I am really lovin' this story! Update soon!

sunflowersing

Oh my gosh! Update soon! :-D

sunflowersing

I'm so confused. That ending with about the last 10 paragraphs really does not make any sense to me.

sunflowersing

very nicely done! it's a good thing u update regularly. the action is starting.YAY! o i wasn't expecting there was still a father in the story. I love the names u come up with. Lirael, Alexei. How do you come up with them?LOL can't wait for the next chapter

Very pretty story and now it begins! yay! You're doing great...

Me likey! me likey! Beautifuly done. You're a great writer I don't know why no one is looking at this fic! Keep up the great work! I love it.

OMG!! I knew the uncle was going to be evil! Lol. A little graphic for me but I like your writing. The story seem to be progressing, i can't wait until the action starts.

The lady said not to expect being treated as well as she was at home, but I think anything is better than home. Well, almost anything. Update soon!

sunflowersing