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| heartlesschild 2008-03-06 ch 10,  | abuseI love this story! Everything blends so well ^_^. I look forward to the next chapter. ~Shanna~ |
| sunflowersing 2007-10-26 ch 6, | abuseO! Another cool chapter! Update ASAP! YAY! :-D sunflowersing |
| vainXfantasy 2007-10-07 ch 5, | abuseyou're doing a great job so far. lovin' it! I love dragons!Lol |
| sunflowersing 2007-10-06 ch 5, | abuseWow! I am really lovin' this story! Update soon! sunflowersing |
| sunflowersing 2007-10-03 ch 4, | abuseOh my gosh! Update soon! :-D sunflowersing |
| sunflowersing 2007-10-03 ch 3, | abuseI'm so confused. That ending with about the last 10 paragraphs really does not make any sense to me. sunflowersing |
| vainXfantasy 2007-09-30 ch 4, | abusevery nicely done! it's a good thing u update regularly. the action is starting.YAY! o i wasn't expecting there was still a father in the story. I love the names u come up with. Lirael, Alexei. How do you come up with them?LOL can't wait for the next chapter |
| Crazy Dude, II 2007-09-30 ch 4, | abuseVery pretty story and now it begins! yay! You're doing great... |
| Crazy Dude, II 2007-09-23 ch 3, | abuseMe likey! me likey! Beautifuly done. You're a great writer I don't know why no one is looking at this fic! Keep up the great work! I love it. |
| vainXfantasy 2007-09-16 ch 2, | abuseOMG!! I knew the uncle was going to be evil! Lol. A little graphic for me but I like your writing. The story seem to be progressing, i can't wait until the action starts. |
| sunflowersing 2007-09-12 ch 2, | abuseThe lady said not to expect being treated as well as she was at home, but I think anything is better than home. Well, almost anything. Update soon! sunflowersing |
| Crazy Dude, II 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseWow I have to say this is a great first chapter! I love it. It almost brought me to tears. Gives me a little more inspiration to update my fic. I can't wait until you update. You're doing a wonderful job! |
| vainXfantasy 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseThis was a very good start. The description was a little bit confusing seeing how it was a little hard to figure out who u were describing with the ebony hair and fair skin. And i wasn't sure if the aunt and her daughter had dark skin as in African American dark or just a tan dark. So the description needs to be more clear. I like the way u write and the vocabulary. The names for the sun and moon i though were unique. Did you make them up or are they from a legend or myth or in a different language? Overall, a fantastic start. I would like to keep reading so hope you update soon |