Reviews for He's a Rockstar - FictionPress.com

simpleplan13 2007-10-26 ch 1,	abuseI like this.. I'm pretty sure every girl can relate to this poem... we've all had crushes on rockstars... you describe it very well and I love the two lines about dreaming and reality.. great piece
NeverBefore 2007-09-22 ch 1,	abuseAww, I like it =) May I ask who is it about?
HauntedMisery 2007-08-29 ch 1,	abuseI love this piece
PermanentComatose 2007-08-28 ch 1,	abuseI really like this. It shows how few of us feel about certain rockstars. Just out of curiosity, who is the particular rockstar this was about? Very well done. -Veronique
Emely 2007-08-28 ch 1,	abuseAww! What a cute poem. i really enjoyed it. I can totally relate. The only thing I can suggest is to consider not capitalizing the first letter of every line, just to spice things up. Hugs, Em
R. Douglas 2007-08-28 ch 1,	abuseI did like it, it's very well written. My only comment would be that you should try to match sentence lengths? To make it flow a little bit better. "It always puts me in a great mood, I don't even know what to say" and "Who love him like I do and who all want to be a part of his world" are fine, but then they get a little shorter. I personally think it's better in a poem to be have shorter lines, but that's just me. Hey, if you have time would you please review something of mine? Failure is Becoming and Hell is another name for New York are my newest ones and I'd like some reviews if you can spare them.