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| Hunter Ross 2008-05-06 ch 14,  | abuseI remember reading about an essay, Nearly identical to Michael's talk about hell. I still think it was hilarious. "It literally can't exist." |
| Hunter Ross 2008-05-05 ch 3, | abuseSo far, this is one of the best stories I've read. I'm definitely going to keep on reading. |
| Jesse Pelletier 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseHe is so funny! I'm going to keep reading, this has creepy, funny and insightful all rolled into one sandwich...well story...anyways on to the next part! :) |
| delta-six 2008-02-16 ch 2, | abuseHey love the story. I could definitely relate with the main character and would probably act the same way as him. I like how it's in the near future but everything's the same which is probably how it will end up being. From what I've read this is a pretty realistic depiction of life. I'll definitely check your other stories out. |
| daughterofcokie 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseI love this so far. Its really creative. |
| Cru 2007-12-15 ch 22, | abuseHm... I wonder why Area 51 is important... Military base, or teh fact there's ALIENS INNIT?! Lookin' forward to more. ~MC |
| NEWK 2007-11-23 ch 13, anon. | abusePothead aliens and fundementalist christians? What the hell were you smoking? Damn entertaining though. Seems like you're familiar with Topeka. I live near it. Have you been there? I always hoped Fred Phelps would die soon... |
| englit 2007-11-14 ch 9, | abuseWah, cliffhanger!! D: This story is great! Really fast-paced, sometimes too fast-paced but it works. Love your sense of humour and the stoner jokes. And I enjoyed the elaboration on the aliens and the training and all that, it's a great set-up for the invasion proper (or reporting, to be more accurate.) Also it's brilliant how you incorporate all these real-life happenings and make it feel real and imminent, despite the far-fetched premise (or is it really so far-fetched?? ;) A logical error, or something: in the precious chapter they were administered the eye cameras in the incense. Didn't they get that just after they came on the ship? (or was that something else? too lazy to go back and check.) Anyway I LOVE the story, please update soon. |
| Cru 2007-09-25 ch 8, | abuseOh, yeah. This is gonna be good. xD |
| Le Meg 2007-09-18 ch 7, | abuse"And I’ll take 'Personal secrets that you wouldn’t tell your own mother, much less an alien commander' for a thousand dollars, Alex." That line made me laugh out loud. |
| J4KE 2007-09-15 ch 6, anon. | abuseyeah, I'm not going to lie. This story is looking to be ridiculously good. I thought I'd seen everything possible done with the Alien Invasion story, but I was wrong. You've got a great character and a helluva plot. I can't wait for more! |
| Cru 2007-09-13 ch 6, | abuseInteresting. And this is going to be a shitty war. And hookers! Wow, this is great; almost better than Dead of Night! |
| Le Meg 2007-09-09 ch 4, | abuseNerd. ;p But I got most of the references too, so I guess that makes two of us. Next time I will bring my towel. |
| Cru 2007-09-09 ch 4, | abuseSh'weet. And I've never read Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy, but I can guess pretty well. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Cru 2007-09-05 ch 2, | abuseLesbians, stoners, swears, hardboiled humor and your usual great writing style makes for a great story. On to the next chapter! |