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| explosion of planes 2007-12-23 ch 1,  | abusei like this i adore the fifth stanza good job :] |
| simpleplan13 2007-10-26 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot.. I love the metaphors... especially the tulip one... wonderful way to describe the whole concept |
| generically beautiful 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseI found the word "kidney" slightly out of place, but the last stanza was so amazing that it totally made up for it. =) -Christine |
| HauntedMisery 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseVery beautiful |
| Faith Adeline 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseexcellent poem, very well written. Keep it up! Faith |
| Ashelin 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseI adored the ending. The word "kidney" was kind of weird, but it still went well. I really liked this. Good job. |
| she smolders 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseThis entire poem was a lovely, sensual read. I wish I could put as much imagery and emotions into my words like you do. |