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| JamieBell 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, but so terribly sad. I really liked it. |
| A.N. Lindale 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abuseHow should I describe the feeling after reading this? I feel as if you had taken me to the sky and I flew, and then suddenly I was just there...I would not know how to go back to earth again. |
| Ghost in the Dark 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseNice, believable PoV with a character I can associate with someone from real life. I liked it start to finish, including all the ambiguity and vagueness. The writing style of this was something sorta new to me, but it was pretty interesting. Always liked your stuff. ~Ghost |
| xtotallyatpeacex 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was really different, but I liked it nonetheless. The way the main character had no grammar skills added to it as well, and his POV was very believable. The begining was really good as well, because it immediately drew me in. Was it a bit more ambiguous than you intended? Because the start is really quite detailed, compared to the end. But yeah, good job. :D |
| SnowsxBitterxHeart 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseWow, how sad. I loved it. It was quite different than what I have read in the past. Very good. ^^ *Snow |
| Artemis Anderson 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseWow...this was a really amazing story. Very well written. |