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| Twilight Starr 2008-08-11 ch 13,  | abuseIt sounds like they were naughty. Nice work. Have a good one. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-07-14 ch 12, | abuseCute chapter. I hope you feel better soon. Nice work. Keep writing! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-06-23 ch 11, | abuseSuch a sweet chapter. I don't think there is such a thing as a *normal* Christmas. Something has to happen every year! Nice work. Sorry for taking so long to R&R. Have a fantastic summer. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-06-13 ch 10, | abuseNice addition. It's good to see more into their relationship. Good job! Have a fantastic day and lovely summer. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| BettyBoo 2008-05-20 ch 10, | abuseits alright that you havent updated at least you have done it now and that's a relief! so thank you! and keep up the good work! |
| IndianPrincess 2008-04-07 ch 9, | abuseOk I've finally got a chance to catch back up with this story I missed somehow the last two chapters and wasn't able to send a review for the one before these last two I was out of town without Internet and was only able to copy and save and read later without the luxury of saying anything afterwards so please forgive because I really like this story. Thanks for the updates please update again real soon ok? IP |
| Twilight Starr 2008-03-17 ch 9, | abuseGreat chapter. It almost made me cry. Good job! Have a fantastic day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-03-02 ch 8, | abuseNice work. Have an excellent day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-02-17 ch 7, | abuseSorry for taking so long to review. Migraines plus the computer do not mix. Miranda and Jay were certainly getting close. Miranda seemed nice, but it still seems like Jay and Ski should end up together. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-01-19 ch 6, | abuseNice session of story telling. Good job! Have a lovely day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-12-27 ch 5, | abuseGood chapter. Nice work with some emotion. Have a lovely day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| IndianPrincess 2007-12-25 ch 5, | abuseThanks again for another great update its ok that its taken a little while atleast I didn't miss out on reading it. Hope all is well with you and look forward to reading your next update so please give it to us as soon as you get a chance. Have a wonderful day. IP |
| IndianPrincess 2007-11-04 ch 4, | abuseThanks for the update looking forward to the next one whenever you have a chance to post one take care for now. IP |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-03 ch 4, | abuseGood chapter. Their pasts are so sad. I wonder what happens next. Good luck with your computer. Have a wonderful day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| IndianPrincess 2007-10-09 ch 3, | abuseGreat upate but OMG I can't believe that Toni kissed DJ and right there in front of Ski I was like what the heck were they thinking well all I can say is if sky really want to be with him then she needs to make up her mind and do something about it. Well thanks for the update and look forward to the next one so please update again real soon. IP |