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| Clargirl5 2007-12-15 ch 4,  | abuseIts a great story! The ending just needs some work... if you develop it a bit more, like how she met his Fairy family... that would make it even better! |
| sunflowersing 2007-11-24 ch 4, | abuseYay! That was a beautiful and lovely fairy tale! :-D Write more stuff! sunflowersing |
| virgo-valentina 2007-11-24 ch 4, | abuseOmg!! That story was so cute!! I hope u write more stories like that! Lol! |
| vesta_star 2007-09-05 ch 3, anon. | abusethis story is really good n really sweet!u have to update soon!don't just leave us hanging! plz plz plz update soon! |
| CarlyJo 2007-09-04 ch 3, | abuseSo sweet, and so sad. Great job. UPDATE SOON! |
| devils-best-friend 2007-09-03 ch 3, | abuseNo, no Its good. There's not much action but its ok cause its still very well written and its quite sweet. PLus u did warn us that it wasnt going to be very exciting. Not all chapters have to be exciting though. |
| Forgottenunloved 2007-09-02 ch 3, | abuseTHATS IT? NO! MORE! |
| sunflowersing 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseI think this is an awesome story idea. I feel the need to defend my lateness for the review. I have been reading it from day one, but I was reading on a device that won't let me submit reviews. So here it is! :-D hehe. lol. sunflowersing |
| Angelz on edge 2007-09-02 ch 3, | abusehehehe never gives up! really good i love plz do more^-^ |
| Forgottenunloved 2007-09-01 ch 2, | abusehe let her go! just like that! but he has to want her back! is he going to go back for her! ah! you must upsate! soo many questions are running through my head! they have to be answered! FANTASTIC story! update please! really soon! like...NOWISH!?!!? thank you! :D |
| Angels and Ashes 2007-08-30 ch 2, | abuseAww, poor Nyx. And everything was going so well for him until then. |
| devils-best-friend 2007-08-30 ch 2, | abuseoh Nyx! Dont cry! I'll b ur's. lol i always imagine Nyx with electric blue hair. Its kinda hot lol |
| Angelz on edge 2007-08-30 ch 2, | abuseaww poor Nyx, i woulda stayed i mean how cool would it be? sorry i've gotta weird mind ^-^ |
| Angels and Ashes 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abuseI love fairy stories ^_^ I am liking this so far, update soon:) |
| devils-best-friend 2007-08-29 ch 1, | abusehmm... this story is seeming very delicious! What happens next? |